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These are okay man, but you really should get a buddy to spell check for you, there are quite a few errors in this and the other game. Also, what was the point of the knife?

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Gotta be real, the motive of the monster kinda pissed me off lol. "oh I was bullied and killed by said bullies, so I'm going to be a bigger piece of shit than them and kill a bunch of random innocent people that had nothing to do with my demise because I suck ass", that's literally what I got from the monster lmao. Poor Petra, such a nice character. Shame I probably got those 15 other people killed. I will say, using a different art style for him did make it a lot creepier, but I still would have decked him in the teeth

That was a good read! Thank you for the reply, been enjoying the game on and off for quite a while now, and only just now noticed the version I've had sitting on my phone was Shattered lol

Getting closer than I have before to the ending, hoping I can finally pull it off on pc 

I had no idea the original game was open source, no wonder I've seen so many versions of it lol. What's different with your version? Im playing but cant really tell the difference

I gotta say brother, I know your following the Fears to Fathom formula, it's beyond obvious but.. there's something about your pacing I'm enjoying a lot more than that series that started this trend. I'll be real, I've played your other games before, and I gotta say, leave that stupid shit behind and focus on this instead because you really got something going here. Please do us all a favor and don't ever charge $10 for an hour long game like the other guy though, because, I hate to tell you, but most of us will just pirate it. I see episode 3, and I want to try it out, but what happened to episode 2?

Game has potential, but it's riddled with soft locking bugs that require a checkpoint restart. Also, when interacting with Robert after he fixed my car, I was met with this dialogue, what the hell is this? "Emporium of Vrykolas"? This was a major bug, as even restarting at a checkpoint did not remove it from the screen, and it's really killing my motivation to continue. I also highly recommend learning some optimization, as 6.3gb for what this game actually contained is a bit on the wild side

Spooky for sure, but I have one big complaint that I hope you will address about the player character's model.. He's wearing a right shoe on his left foot. Sorry, but it bothers the hell out of me every time I look down lol. Hope it was fixed in the full release!

The alternate ending was stupid, what was the point of the bat.

I was quickly getting tired of Amanda's yapping monologue, but the twist caught me off guard and gave me a good laugh

The idea was neat, but it's obvious English is not your first language - I recommend getting someone to help you with translating next time, because that was very hard to follow.

Decent, visually it was nice. I will say, the whole "SHE" and "HE" thing constantly in caps was pretty cheesy. The ending also kind of felt like you didn't really know how to actually end it, neat song though.

Honestly, after a bit, the interviews started sounded very preachy. Like I get it, we literally owe our lives to nature, but they were just saying the same thing over and over as if it somehow made the meaning deeper. As for the game itself, artistically speaking, it was VERY well done! I enjoyed all the transitions into different entities of nature, I feel as though this game took some inspiration from other nature games such as Flower by Thatgamecompany. 

Great game, I feel as though I could have personally enjoyed the experience more without the voiced segments, but that's just me. I see your awards, and am glad you succeeded with your vision.

A little too predictable, but the graphics were pretty 

This was very well written and programmed, you picked the perfect moments to disable to ability to scroll back in dialogue and really stuck the player with their choices. Disabling the load option at the end was a neat idea too, unfortunately I had to continue with ". . ." because I missed ending 37 and I wanted all 40 lol. I also liked how the carnival game trained you for the ending sequence, timers really add a lot to these VNs. Good work!

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The kitten at the end was so cute!

Did I just have sex with my computer, lol

Very creative game, man. No nonsensical jump scares, the mind games were all well paced, and having to think outside the box to get the codes was a neat idea for sure. Probably spent more time on the other game than I did on the puzzles (the axe locker eluded me for longer than I'd like to admit), but that brought me back to classic retro games and their difficulty lol

Looking forward to checking out your other games 

The very first screen has a typo, the story is a bit nonsensical, blood appeared near the bathroom before the car actually crashed, and the alpha on the bush textures is turned up to 100 making them look like janky blocks. I did like your camera work for the small amount of cutscenes, and the theme of this guy having these nightmares is a neat idea, but the execution needs a lot of work. Hope you've managed to improve over time, you have potential. Good luck

You're supposed to add the ketchup after you roll it, not before

Alright, that was pretty funny! I enjoyed it all, except for the actual ending. So basically, you become his bitch. What a shit ending if I'm being honest, but hey, I dig your artwork, and the food did look tasty lol

You made me want to punch a drawing, good work 

Curious, did your name literally come from that Dark Souls animation? Because that's how I say it in my head every time I see it, I love it lol

Oh, the game was fun too

Hell of a story, great job with this. Can't wait for #2

That was pretty funny and cute lol, good job

Very fun story fella! If I had to criticize anything, it would be that some of the walking segments took a bit too long, albeit I know the intention was to build up, well, tension lol

Was a bit surprised at the characters that showed up at the very end, a tad funny, but I enjoyed it. Good work, and good voice actors as well

sucks to be you lmao

It's already there, just keep clicking the perspective button on the left

At first I thought the guy character was super lame, then realized that the whole game is supposed to be funny once I heard grandpa talk, fun game lol

"I'm gonna make a dookie on your bones!"

Needs a bit of work, for starters, put the milk in one of the fridges - had to come watch a video here to figure out where the hell it was lol. The pancake box looked like burritos, and $9 for everything? What a steal!

 During the 2nd half, the fail state sets you back a bit too far imo. I accidentaly clicked the bed and had to restart because of the guy hiding under it - I get it, I heard the foot steps and the epilogue explained why he was there but like.. why couldn't I just stomp his head in lol. Decided to gamble on a bad ending and let the knocker in, expected to die, but not to be put all the way back in the garage, maybe change it to when it's time to clean trash?

 Crunchy pizza for a microwave, and the TV was off while eating on the couch? Mad man! Jokes aside, this was a pretty good job for your first full-on attempt, keep it up and I'm sure you'll only get better. Good luck to you

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You can get everyone 

don't take the grimoire when you have a chance to save the girls otherwise the priest at teachers wedding wont help you and she'll stay behind with David

Kind of a goofy game, 4/10 

Alien easter egg was funny. I'd just drop the typing sound from the text or let us skip text all together, it's far too slow 

Damn, wish I read the full description before downloading. I was getting fully immersed then seemed to run out of things to do when I killed everything, came back here to check and realized it was an unfinished demo lol

Hope you do continue this some day, I had fun playing this one. Did notice the pistol would have unlimited mags if you didn't pick up ammo, made things sorta easy lol

Seeing the other replies, I see I missed the credit roll lol

The ending I got was after it told me to just stare at each other in the void, I got off the monitor, shut the power off, ripped the boards off the door and the game just closed itself. Interesting game

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That was a blast, took a lot longer to get through the fountain part than I'd like to admit, making letters with it was very creative and had me stumped for a solid minute. Really, all the puzzles were pretty creative, I felt like a big brain solving them lol

Hope to see another project from you some time

Got all 3 endings, I gotta say, the ones involving the last customer were actually pretty funny lol, fun game

Great game for your first go! My oooonly nitpick is that this takes place in the 80's, but the house is filled with flatscreen TVs, makes no sense lol. Other than that, great job, can't wait for more in the series